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Wisp: Audition Page 3 by Dancing-Sword Wisp: Audition Page 3 by Dancing-Sword
And here's the final page. I couldn't find the actual sheet I wrote the original dialogue on so I feel like it might be awkward. Like the last page, I had to cut some little bits like fog/mist around the panels, but they didn't really add anything. Even with cutting some bits, this feels like a rush job for me. I really expected I have more time to work on this, but with a job and other things I was surprised at how tired I was. Hopefully I get used to the work load for the tournament (if I get in that is).

And to those wondering, I am starting Levi underpowered for the tournament (he can't absorb and release new chemicals. He still has all the stuff in his system still though). Maybe his powers will come back during the first round, maybe they won't; it'll be all up to whoever I'm facing on how they want to go about it. I thought it would help even him out.


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Houkou-NRL Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011   Traditional Artist
And gravity trumps yet another! Man, poor guy, winding up in some unfamiliar place (though maybe Wisp is better than where he was before?).

Hmm, the only thing I can really input is that your bookshelf feels pretty flat. No depth. Otherwise, I quite liked this. Also, nice notice!
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Dancing-Sword Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011
Lol. Yeah, I didn't go in depth with his personality in the reference so I should expect a number of people to come up with a different feel for him. I wanted to try and show some of his personality now since his voice is muffled and face obscured (at least from the competitors' point of view). I'll probably expand on it before the first round starts if I get in.
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Dancing-Sword Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011
Didn't notice I didn't hit reply before posting. Feeling really silly right now. :ashamed:
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Ruby229 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Earth used Gravity! ...It's Super Effective! Lol, I really like this guy. He seems quite a bit different in personality than I expected for some reason.
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Dancing-Sword Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011
Lol. Yeah, I didn't go in depth with his personality in the reference so I should expect a number of people to come up with a different feel for him. I wanted to try and show some of his personality now since his voice is muffled and face obscured (at least from the competitors' point of view). I'll probably expand on it before the first round starts if I get in.
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therichnobody Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Just read the whole audition, and my love for this guy only increased ten fold. He's such a normal guy in a sense, just with a certain bad attribute to him. D=
I feel for the guy... And I would love to see what exactly he'd tell Madalyn xD

Also also, panel 14 is like, just too cute in my head
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Dancing-Sword Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011
Thanks, dude! Gonna reread your audition now so I can comment.
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Doodleniks Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a really good audition. I really like it. Good luck in Wisp! :)
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Dancing-Sword Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011
Replying to all your comments here. :D

Thanks and good luck to you too.
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Doodleniks Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, haha, I always feel bad when the thing says don't forget to add a comment or whatever so I do. xD

You're welcome and thankies x3 :iconsuperheroglompplz:
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